Index: options-writing.php
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--- options-writing.php	(revision 2457)
+++ options-writing.php	(working copy)
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 
 <fieldset class="options">
 	<legend><?php _e('Update Services') ?></legend>
-          <p><?php printf(__('When you publish a new post WordPress can notify site update services. For more about this see <a href="%s">Update Services</a> on the Codex. Separate multiple service URIs with line breaks.'), 'http://codex.wordpress.org/Update_Services') ?></p>
+          <p><?php printf(__('When you publish a new post WordPress automatically notifies the following site update services. For more about this see <a href="%s">Update Services</a> on the Codex. Separate multiple service URIs with line breaks.'), 'http://codex.wordpress.org/Update_Services') ?></p>
 	
 	<textarea name="ping_sites" id="ping_sites" style="width: 98%;" rows="3" cols="50"><?php form_option('ping_sites'); ?></textarea>
 </fieldset>