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Ticket #22455: 22455.jane1.diff

File 22455.jane1.diff, 4.2 KB (added by Ipstenu, 17 months ago)

First Pass for Jane

  • wp-admin/about.php

     
    4040                <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-media.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-100" /> 
    4141 
    4242                <div> 
    43                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Easier interface' ); ?></h4> 
    44                         <p><?php echo ( 'Adding media to your posts is more streamlined than ever. It\'s a breeze to insert, align, caption, and link to media within your posts.' ); ?></p> 
     43                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Easier Interface' ); ?></h4> 
     44                        <p><?php echo ( 'Adding media to your posts has been streamlined, making it a breeze to insert, align, caption, and link to media within your posts.' ); ?></p> 
    4545                </div> 
    4646                <div> 
    47                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Picturesque galleries' ); ?></h4> 
    48                         <p><?php echo ( 'Adding image galleries is easier with drag and drop reordering, inline caption editing, and simplified controls for the gallery layout.' ); ?></p> 
     47                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Picturesque Galleries' ); ?></h4> 
     48                        <p><?php echo ( 'Customizing your image galleries is faster with drag and drop reordering, inline caption editing, and simplified controls for layout.' ); ?></p> 
    4949                </div> 
    5050                <div class="last-feature"> 
    51                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Attachment page editor' ); ?></h4> 
     51                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Attachment Page Editor' ); ?></h4> 
    5252                        <p><?php echo ( 'You can crop, rotate and resize images right in the Media Library! There are now formatting controls for content on your attachment pages.' ); ?></p> 
    5353                </div> 
    5454        </div> 
    5555</div> 
    5656 
    5757<div class="changelog"> 
    58         <h3><?php echo ( 'Smoother experience' ); ?></h3> 
     58        <h3><?php echo ( 'Smoother Experience' ); ?></h3> 
    5959 
    6060        <div class="feature-section"> 
    6161                <h4><?php echo ( 'Simplified settings, better buttons, easier controls' ); ?></h4> 
    62                 <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress always aims to stay out of the way, and let you get on with publishing your content. You\'ll find simplified settings screens, more aesthetically pleasing buttons, and easier controls such as the improved color picker. They\'re the little details we hope you\'ll never notice.' ); ?></p> 
     62                <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress always aims to stay out of the way and let you focus on publishing your content. With intuitive settings and aesthetically pleasing buttons, you\'ll forget the improved color picker wasn\'t always there. They\'re the little details we hope you\'ll never notice.' ); ?></p> 
    6363                <div class="three-col-images"> 
    6464                        <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-tinymce.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-30 first-feature" /> 
    6565                        <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-buttons.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-30" /> 
     
    7575                <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-twenty-twelve.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-66" /> 
    7676                <h4><?php echo ( 'Beauty in its simplicity' ); ?></h4> 
    7777                <p><?php echo ( 'Twenty Twelve is an elegant, readable, and fully responsive theme that makes your site content look its best on any device.' ); ?></p> 
    78                 <p><?php echo ( 'Make the design of your site fully yours with a custom menu, custom header image, and custom background color or image.' ); ?></p> 
     78                <p><?php echo ( 'Perfect for a personal blog or a website, the home page template lets you make the design of your website fully your own.' ); ?></p> 
    7979        </div> 
    8080</div> 
    8181 
     
    9696                <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-accessibility2.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-30" /> 
    9797                <img alt="" src="<?php echo esc_url( admin_url( 'images/screenshots/about-accessibility1.png' ) ); ?>" class="image-30" /> 
    9898                <h4><?php echo ( 'For everyone' ); ?></h4> 
    99                 <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress has wider support for more devices than ever before. Users of screenreaders, touch devices, and mouse-less devices will all see improvements to ease of use and accessibility.' ); ?></p> 
     99                <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress has wider support for more devices than ever before. Users of screenreaders, touch devices, and mouseless devices will all see improvements to ease of use and accessibility.' ); ?></p> 
    100100                <?php //TODO: Link to new Codex page listing the accessibility features of WordPress. ?> 
    101101        </div> 
    102102</div>