Ticket #24832: 24832.6.diff

wp-admin/about.php

@@ -69 +69 @@
                         <p><?php _e( 'Always know who&#8217;s editing with live updates that appear in the list of posts. And if someone leaves for lunch with a post open, you can take over where they left off.' ); ?></p>
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 <div class="changelog">
@@ -92 +91 @@
         <div class="feature-section col three-col">
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                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Shortcode Improvements' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New shortcode utility functions and shortcode_atts_$shortcode filter' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Search content for shortcodes with <code>has_shortcode()</code> and filter shortcode attributes with the <code>shortcode_atts_$shortcode</code> filter.' ); ?></p>
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                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Revision Control' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New fine-grained revision controls (wp_revisions_to_keep(), etc.  — filters instead of constants)' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Finely-grained revision controls allow you to keep a different number of revisions for each post type.' ); ?></p>
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                 <div class="last-feature">
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Audio/Video API' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New audio/video API, including access to file metadata' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'The new audio/video APIs give developers access to powerful media metadata.' ); ?></p>
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-                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Markup Updates' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'Improved markup for comment forms, search forms, and comment lists, including HTML5 markup support' ); ?></p>
+                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Semantic Markup' ); ?></h4>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Improved markup for comment forms, search forms, and comment lists, including support for HTML5 markup.' ); ?></p>
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                         <h4><?php echo ( 'JS Utilities' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'Handy JavaScript utilities for things like Ajax, templating, and Backbone view management' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Handy JavaScript utilities ease common tasks like Ajax requests, templating, and Backbone view management.' ); ?></p>
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                 <div class="last-feature">
                         <h4><?php _e( 'External Libraries' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New and updated libraries: MediaElement.js, jQuery 1.10, jQuery UI 1.10.3, jQuery Migrate, Backbone 1.0' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'New and updated libraries: MediaElement.js, jQuery 1.10, jQuery UI 1.10.3, jQuery Migrate, Backbone 1.0.' ); ?></p>
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