Ticket #25837: 25837.4.diff

inc/customizer.php

@@ -40 +40 @@
         // Add the featured content section in case it's not already there.
         $wp_customize->add_section( 'featured_content', array(
                 'title'       => __( 'Featured Content', 'twentyfourteen' ),
-                'description' => sprintf( __( 'Easily feature all posts with the <a href="%1$s">"featured" tag</a> or a tag of your choice; if no posts match the tag, <a href="%2$s">"sticky" posts</a> will be displayed instead.', 'twentyfourteen' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?tag=featured' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?show_sticky=1' ) ),
+                'description' => sprintf( __( 'Use a <a href="%1$s"> tag</a> to feature your posts. If no posts match the tag, <a href="%2$s">sticky posts</a> will be displayed instead.', 'twentyfourteen' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?tag=featured' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?show_sticky=1' ) ),
                 'priority'    => 130,
         ) );
 

inc/featured-content.php

@@ -352 +352 @@
         public static function customize_register( $wp_customize ) {
                 $wp_customize->add_section( 'featured_content', array(
                         'title'          => __( 'Featured Content', 'twentyfourteen' ),
-                        'description'    => sprintf( __( 'Easily feature all posts with the <a href="%1$s">"featured" tag</a> or a tag of your choice; if no posts match the tag, <a href="%2$s">"sticky" posts</a> will be displayed instead.', 'twentyfourteen' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?tag=featured' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?show_sticky=1' ) ),
+                        'description'    => sprintf( __( 'Use the <a href="%1$s">"featured" tag</a> to feature your posts. You can change this to a tag of your choice; if no posts match the tag, <a href="%2$s">sticky posts</a> will be displayed instead.', 'twentyfourteen' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?tag=featured' ), admin_url( '/edit.php?show_sticky=1' ) ),
                         'priority'       => 130,
                         'theme_supports' => 'featured-content',
                 ) );
@@ -371 +371 @@
 
                 // Add Featured Content controls.
                 $wp_customize->add_control( 'featured-content[tag-name]', array(
-                        'label'    => __( 'Tag name', 'twentyfourteen' ),
+                        'label'    => __( 'Tag Name', 'twentyfourteen' ),
                         'section'  => 'featured_content',
                         'priority' => 20,
                 ) );
                 $wp_customize->add_control( 'featured-content[hide-tag]', array(
-                        'label'    => __( 'Hide tag from displaying in post meta and tag clouds.', 'twentyfourteen' ),
+                        'label'    => __( 'Don&rsquo;t display tag on front end.', 'twentyfourteen' ),
                         'section'  => 'featured_content',
                         'type'     => 'checkbox',
                         'priority' => 30,

style.css

@@ -3 +3 @@
 Theme URI: http://wordpress.org/themes/
 Author: the WordPress team
 Author URI: http://wordpress.org/
-Description: The default theme for 2014 is a magazine theme with a sleek, modern, and beautifully crafted responsive design. The home page features your choice of up to 6 posts prominently displayed in a grid or slider, controlled by the "featured" post tag; you can change the tag and layout in Appearance > Customize. Three widget-ready areas to customize your sidebars and footer area, including a special Ephemera widget to highlight your latest videos, music, links, and more. Tailor content pages to your needs with two extra page templates: full-width (no sidebar) and a Contributor page to show off multiple authors.
+Description: In 2014, our default theme lets you create a responsive magazine website with a sleek, modern design. Feature your favorite homepage content in either a grid or a slider. Use the three widget areas to customize your website, and change your content's layout with a full width page template and a contributor page to show of your authors. Creating a magazine website with WordPress has never been easier.  
 Version: 0.1
 License: GNU General Public License v2 or later
 License URI: http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-2.0.html