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Ticket #26387: 26387.10.diff

File 26387.10.diff, 6.0 KB (added by nacin, 8 years ago)

Edits from me and Mark Jaquith.

  • wp-admin/about.php

     
    4545                <div class="col-1">
    4646                        <img src="images/about-modern-aesthetics.png" />
    4747                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Modern aesthetic' ); ?></h3>
    48                         <p><?php echo ( 'The new admin has a fresh, uncluttered design that puts clarity and simplicity ahead of visual flourishes.' ); ?></p>
     48                        <p><?php echo ( 'The new WordPress dashboard has a fresh, uncluttered design that embraces clarity and simplicity.' ); ?></p>
    4949                </div>
    5050                <div class="col-2">
    5151                        <img src="images/about-typography.png" />
    5252                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Clean typography' ); ?></h3>
    53                         <p><?php echo ( 'Open Sans is Open Source. Our new typography is simple, friendly, and optimized for web and mobile interfaces.' ); ?></p>
     53                        <p><?php echo ( 'The Open Sans typeface provides simple, friendly text that is optimized for both desktop and mobile viewing. It&#8217;s even open source, just like WordPress.' ); ?></p>
    5454                </div>
    5555                <div class="col-3 last-feature">
    5656                        <img src="images/about-contrast.png" />
    5757                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Refined contrast' ); ?></h3>
    58                         <p><?php echo ( 'What good is beautiful design if you can&#8217;t see it? Improved contrast gives you a better reading experience.' ); ?></p>
     58                        <p><?php echo ( 'We think beautiful design should never sacrifice legibility. With superior contrast and large, comfortable type, the new design is easy to read and a pleasure to navigate.' ); ?></p>
    5959                </div>
    6060        </div>
    6161</div>
     
    6666        <div class="feature-section col two-col">
    6767                <div>
    6868                        <h3><?php echo ( 'WordPress on every&nbsp;device' ); ?></h3>
    69                         <p><?php echo ( 'Whether you&#8217;re on your smartphone or tablet, your notebook or desktop, WordPress looks great on every device. Now you can update your website wherever you are.' ); ?></p>
    70                         <h4><?php echo ( 'High definition is here' ); ?></h4>
    71                         <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress is sharper than ever; vector icons mean no more blurry edges. You get the best viewing experience no matter what type of device you use.' ); ?></p>
     69                        <p><?php echo ( 'We all access the internet in different ways. Smartphone, tablet, notebook, desktop — no matter what you use, WordPress will adapt and you&#8217;ll feel right at home.' ); ?></p>
     70                        <h4><?php echo ( 'High definition at high&nbsp;speed' ); ?></h4>
     71                        <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress is sharper than ever with new vector-based icons that scale to your screen. By ditching pixels, pages load significantly faster, too.' ); ?></p>
    7272                </div>
    7373                <div class="last-feature about-colors-img">
    7474                        <img src="<?php echo admin_url( 'images/about-colors.png' ); ?>" />
     
    8888        <div class="feature-section col one-col">
    8989                <div>
    9090                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Pick a color' ); ?></h3>
    91                         <p><?php echo ( 'We&#8217;ve included eight color schemes so you can pick your favorite. Choose from any of them below to change it in an instant.' ); ?>
     91                        <p><?php echo ( 'We&#8217;ve included eight color schemes so you can pick your favorite. Choose from any of them below to change it instantly.' ); ?>
    9292                                <?php
    9393                                /** This action is documented in wp-admin/user-edit.php */
    9494                                do_action( 'admin_color_scheme_picker' );
     
    104104<div class="changelog">
    105105        <div class="feature-section col two-col">
    106106                <div>
    107                         <h3><?php echo ( 'A new theme experience' ); ?></h3>
    108                         <p><?php echo ( 'Finding and installing the right theme has never been easier.' ); ?></p>
    109                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Better browsing' ); ?></h4>
    110                         <p><?php echo ( 'Focus is placed on what&#8217;s important &mdash; your theme&#8217;s design. Search through your themes at a glance and add new ones with a click.' ); ?></p>
    111                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Dive into the details' ); ?></h4>
    112                         <p><?php echo ( 'If you need information about any of your themes, just click to discover more. Sit back and use your keyboard&#8217;s navigation arrows to flip through every theme you&#8217;ve got.' ); ?></p>
    113                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Stay updated' ); ?></h4>
    114                         <p><?php echo ( 'You can tell in an instant if a theme needs updated, and like so many things in WordPress, updating it takes just a second.' ); ?></p>
     107                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Refined theme management' ); ?></h3>
     108                        <p><?php echo ( 'Drag-drag-drag. Scroll-scroll-scroll. Widget management can be complicated. With the new design, we&#8217;ve worked to streamline the widgets&nbsp;screen.' ); ?></p>
     109                        <p><?php echo ( 'Have a large monitor? Multiple widget areas stack side-by-side to use the available space. Using a tablet? Just tap a widget to add it.' ); ?></p>
     110                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Browse through your themes' ); ?></h4>
     111                        <p><?php echo ( 'The new themes screen lets you survey your themes at a glance. Or want more information? Click to discover more. Then sit back and use your keyboard&#8217;s navigation arrows to flip through every theme you&#8217;ve got.' ); ?></p>
    115112                </div>
    116113                <div class="last-feature about-themes-img">
    117114                        <img src="<?php echo admin_url( 'images/about-themes.png' ); ?>" />
     
    128125        <div class="feature-section col one-col center-col">
    129126                <div>
    130127                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Turn your blog into a&nbsp;magazine' ); ?></h3>
    131                         <p><?php echo ( 'With a striking design that does not compromise on our trademark simplicity, Twenty Fourteen is our boldest default theme. Choose a grid or a slider to display featured content on your homepage. Customize your homepage with three widget areas or change your layout with two page templates.' ); ?></p>
    132                         <p><?php echo ( 'Creating a magazine website with WordPress has never been easier.' ); ?></p>
     128                        <p><?php echo ( 'Create a beautiful magazine-style site with WordPress and Twenty Fourteen. Choose a grid or a slider to display featured content on your homepage. Customize your site with three widget areas or change your layout with two page templates.' ); ?></p>
     129                        <p><?php echo ( 'With a striking design that does not compromise our trademark simplicity, Twenty Fourteen is our most intrepid default theme yet.' ); ?></p>
    133130                </div>
    134131        </div>
    135132</div>