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Ticket #26387: 26387.5.diff

File 26387.5.diff, 7.6 KB (added by siobhan, 8 years ago)

made a bunch of text changes and edits

  • src/wp-admin/about.php

     
    2121
    2222<h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
    2323
    24 <div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress 3.8! We&rsquo;re happy to bring you the most beautiful WordPress yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
     24<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress 3.8, the most beautiful WordPress yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
    2525
    2626<div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
    2727
     
    3636</h2>
    3737
    3838<div class="changelog">
    39         <h2 class="about-headline-callout"><?php echo ( 'Introducing a new, modern admin design' ); ?></h2>
     39        <h2 class="about-headline-callout"><?php echo ( 'Introducing a modern new design' ); ?></h2>
    4040        <img class="about-overview-img" src="<?php echo admin_url( 'images/about-overview.png' ); ?>" />
    4141
    4242        <div class="feature-section col three-col about-updates">
    4343                <div class="col-1">
    4444                        <p style="margin-top: 20px; background-color: grey; padding: 1em; color: white; min-height: 150px;">Image</p>
    45                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Modern aesthetics' ); ?></h3>
    46                         <p><?php echo ( 'Goodbye decoration, hello simplicity. We removed extraneous details, focusing on a cleaner, more streamlined admin design.' ); ?></p>
     45                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Modern aesthetic' ); ?></h3>
     46                        <p><?php echo ( 'The new admin has a fresh, simple design that puts clarity and simplicity ahead of web design flourishes.' ); ?></p>
    4747                </div>
    4848                <div class="col-2">
    4949                        <p style="margin-top: 20px; background-color: grey; padding: 1em; color: white; min-height: 150px;">Image</p>
    50                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Improved typography' ); ?></h3>
    51                         <p><?php echo ( 'You might notice the type is a little bit bigger. We improved the typography, crafting a better reading experience.' ); ?></p>
     50                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Clean typography' ); ?></h3>
     51                        <p><?php echo ( 'Open sans meets open source. WordPress&#8217;s new typography is upright, friendly, and optimized for web and mobile interfaces.' ); ?></p>
    5252                </div>
    5353                <div class="col-3 last-feature">
    5454                        <p style="margin-top: 20px; background-color: grey; padding: 1em; color: white; min-height: 150px;">Image</p>
    55                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Higher contrast' ); ?></h3>
    56                         <p><?php echo ( 'With bigger typography and both high and low contrast color schemes, our new admin design is great for users of all ages.' ); ?></p>
     55                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Refined contrast' ); ?></h3>
     56                        <p><?php echo ( 'What good is beautiful design if you can&#8217;t see it? Improved contrast gives you a better reading experience.' ); ?></p>
    5757                </div>
    5858        </div>
    5959</div>
     
    6666<div class="changelog">
    6767        <div class="feature-section col two-col">
    6868                <div>
    69                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Take WordPress with you anywhere with our responsive design' ); ?></h3>
    70                         <p><?php echo ( 'The WordPress admin is now completely responsive: you can work on your website easily from your smartphone or tablet. The full power of WordPress is at your fingertips, even when you’re on the go.' ); ?></p>
    71                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Naturally HiDPI' ); ?></h4>
    72                         <p><?php echo ( 'No more blurry edges &#8212; with the inclusion of vector icons and graphics, the admin is now entirely HiDPI, so you get the best viewing experience no matter what kind of computer or mobile device you use.' ); ?></p>
     69                        <h3><?php echo ( 'WordPress on every device' ); ?></h3>
     70                        <p><?php echo ( 'Whether you&#8217;re on your smartphone or tablet, your notebook or desktop, WordPress looks beautiful on every device. Now you can update your website wherever you are.' ); ?></p>
     71                        <h4><?php echo ( 'High definition is here' ); ?></h4>
     72                        <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress is sharper than ever; vector icons and graphics mean no more blurry edges. You get the best viewing experience no matter what type of device you use.' ); ?></p>
    7373                </div>
    7474                <div class="last-feature about-colors-img">
    7575                        <img src="<?php echo admin_url( 'images/about-colors.png' ); ?>" />
     
    8282<div class="changelog about-colors">
    8383        <div class="feature-section col one-col">
    8484                <div>
    85                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Now with more color' ); ?></h3>
    86                         <p><?php echo ( 'Your admin is not longer monochromatic &#8212; we&#8217;ve brought some more color to keep it looking fresh. You now have the option of four different default color schemes.' ); ?></p>
    87                         <p><?php echo ( 'Try them out below:' ); ?></p>
     85                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Pick a color' ); ?></h3>
     86                        <p><?php echo ( 'We&#8217;ve included four color schemes so that you can choose your favorite. Don&#8217;t like this striking new admin? Choose from any of the schemes below to change it in an instant:' ); ?></p>
    8887                        <img src="https://i.cloudup.com/NBlGusRk0H.png" style="border: 2px solid red; max-width: 99%; margin: 0;" />
    89                         <p><?php echo ( 'You can change your color scheme at any time from your profile page.' ); ?></p>
     88                        <p><?php echo ( 'To change your color scheme later, just visit your profile settings.' ); ?></p>
    9089                </div>
    9190        </div>
    9291</div>
     
    9796        <div class="feature-section col two-col">
    9897                <div>
    9998                        <h3><?php echo ( 'A new theme experience' ); ?></h3>
    100                         <p><?php echo ( 'A sleeker, faster, and more visual organization of your themes that is responsive.' ); ?></p>
    101                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Browse better' ); ?></h4>
    102                         <p><?php echo ( 'Enjoy a focused experience with theme screenshots at the center. Quickly search through your themes or add new ones.' ); ?></p>
     99                        <p><?php echo ( 'Finding and installing the right theme has never been easier.' ); ?></p>
     100                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Better browsing' ); ?></h4>
     101                        <p><?php echo ( 'Focus is placed on what&#8217;s important - your theme&#8217;s design. Search through your themes at a glance and add new ones with a click.' ); ?></p>
    103102                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Dive into the details' ); ?></h4>
    104                         <p><?php echo ( 'Expand a theme to see more information and preview it. Use the arrow navigation to quickly swift through your themes.' ); ?></p>
    105                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Easier updates' ); ?></h4>
    106                         <p><?php echo ( 'Identify immediately when a theme update is available.' ); ?></p>
     103                        <p><?php echo ( 'Need more information about any of your themes, just click to discover more, and use your keyboard&#8217;s navigation arrows to flip through all the themes you&#8217;ve got.' ); ?></p>
     104                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Stay updated' ); ?></h4>
     105                        <p><?php echo ( 'You can tell in an instant if a theme needs updated and, like so many things in WordPress, updating it takes just a second.' ); ?></p>
    107106                </div>
    108107                <div class="last-feature about-themes-img">
    109108                        <img src="<?php echo admin_url( 'images/about-themes.png' ); ?>" />
     
    119118
    120119        <div class="feature-section col one-col">
    121120                <div>
    122                         <h3><?php echo ( 'Our new default theme lets you create a responsive magazine website with an elegant, modern design.' ); ?></h3>
    123                         <p><?php echo ( 'Feature your favorite homepage content in either a grid or a slider. Use the three widget areas to customize your website, and change your content&#8217;s layout with a full width page template and a contributor page to show of your authors.' ); ?></p>
     121                        <h3><?php echo ( 'Turn your blog into a magazine' ); ?></h3>
     122                        <p><?php echo ( 'With a striking design that does not comprise on our trademark simplicity, Twenty Fourteen is our boldest default theme. Choose a grid or a slider to display featured content on your homepage. Customize your homepage with three widget areas or change your layout with two page templates.' ); ?></p>
    124123                        <p><?php echo ( 'Creating a magazine website with WordPress has never been easier.' ); ?></p>
    125124                </div>
    126125        </div>