Ticket #34116: 34116.1.diff

wp-admin/includes/upgrade.php

@@ -214 +214 @@
         ));
 
         // First Page
-        $first_page = sprintf( __( "This is an example page. It's different from a blog post because it will stay in one place and will show up in your site navigation (in most themes). Most people start with an About page that introduces them to potential site visitors. It might say something like this:
+        $first_page = sprintf( __( "This is a sample 'About' page. It's different from a blog post as pages are stand alone content that stay in their hierarchical place. In most themes, pages will show up in your site's navigation by default. Generally people start with a page that introduces them to site visitors. 
 
-<blockquote>Hi there! I'm a bike messenger by day, aspiring actor by night, and this is my website. I live in Los Angeles, have a great dog named Jack, and I like pi&#241;a coladas. (And gettin' caught in the rain.)</blockquote>
+A personal blog might say something like this:
 
-...or something like this:
+<blockquote>Welcome to my blog! I'm a world traveler who works remotely and loves amazing food and the great outdoors. You can find me blogging about my adventures anywhere there's good wifi and strong coffee.</blockquote>
 
-<blockquote>The XYZ Doohickey Company was founded in 1971, and has been providing quality doohickeys to the public ever since. Located in Gotham City, XYZ employs over 2,000 people and does all kinds of awesome things for the Gotham community.</blockquote>
+... or a company could do something like this: 
 
-As a new WordPress user, you should go to <a href=\"%s\">your dashboard</a> to delete this page and create new pages for your content. Have fun!" ), admin_url() );
+<blockquote>Simply Shirts Company's founders realized a simple typeface could make shirts even better. After a successful crowdsourced campaign, we opened our store and now sell our Eco-friendly shirts worldwide via our website. If you wear shirts, you need ours.</blockquote>
+
+Now it's time to make your own page. Go to <a href=\"%s\">your dashboard</a> where you can delete this page and create new ones for your own unique content. Have fun!" ), admin_url() );
         if ( is_multisite() )
                 $first_page = get_site_option( 'first_page', $first_page );
         $first_post_guid = get_option('home') . '/?page_id=2';
@@ -233 +235 @@
                 'post_content' => $first_page,
                 'post_excerpt' => '',
                 'comment_status' => 'closed',
-                'post_title' => __( 'Sample Page' ),
+                'post_title' => __( 'About Page' ),
                 /* translators: Default page slug */
-                'post_name' => __( 'sample-page' ),
+                'post_name' => __( 'about-page' ),
                 'post_modified' => $now,
                 'post_modified_gmt' => $now_gmt,
                 'guid' => $first_post_guid,