Ticket #41191: 41191.rewording.diff

src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php

@@ -1622 +1622 @@
 
         $information_url = _x( 'https://wordpress.org/support/upgrade-php/', 'localized PHP upgrade information page' );
 
-        $msg = __( 'Hi, it’s your friends at WordPress here.' );
         if ( ! $response['is_secure'] ) {
-                $msg .= ' ' . __( 'We noticed that your site is running on an insecure version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
+                $msg = __( 'WordPress has detected that your site is running on an insecure version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
         } else {
-                $msg .= ' ' . __( 'We noticed that your site is running on an outdated version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
+                $msg = __( 'WordPress has detected that your site is running on an outdated version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
         }
 
         ?>
@@ -1642 +1641 @@
                 <a class="button button-primary button-hero" href="<?php echo esc_url( $information_url ); ?>"><?php _e( 'Show me how to upgrade my PHP' ); ?></a>
         </p>
 
-        <h3><?php _e( 'Thank you for taking the time to read this!' ); ?></h3>
-        <p><?php _e( 'If you carefully follow the instructions we&#8217;ve provided, upgrading shouldn&#8217;t take more than a few minutes, and it is generally very safe to do.' ); ?></p>
-        <p><?php _e( 'Good luck and happy blogging!' ); ?></p>
+        <p><?php _e( 'Upgrading usually takes only a few minutes and should be safe if you follow the provided instructions.' ); ?></p>
         <?php
 }