Ticket #43435: 43435.7.diff

src/wp-admin/privacy.php

@@ -126 +126 @@
         <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Tools' ); ?></h1>
         <?php settings_errors(); ?>
         <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
-        <p>
-                <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
-        </p>
-        <p>
-                <?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
-        </p>
+        <p><?php _e( 'If your website collects or processes personal data about people within the European Union, you will need to display a Privacy Policy which conforms with the requirements of European data protection law as well as the expectations of your European users.' ); ?></p>
+        <p><?php _e( 'Please use one of the options below if you already have a Privacy Policy Page or want to create a new one.' ); ?>
+        <p><?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is created or selected, you will be able to manually edit it. The page will include headings, suggestions, plugin and theme details to help you capture all the information you need.' ); ?>
+        <p><?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy notice requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?></p>
         <?php
         if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
                 $edit_href = add_query_arg(
@@ -204 +197 @@
                                         </span>
                                         <?php
                                         wp_nonce_field( 'create-privacy-page' );
-        
                                         submit_button( __( 'Create New Page' ), 'primary', 'submit', false, array( 'id' => 'create-page' ) );
                                         ?>
                                 </form>