Ticket #43865: 43865.2.diff

src/wp-admin/css/common.css

@@ -1286 +1286 @@
         float: none;
 }
 
+/*
+* Privacy Policy settings for large screen
+*/
+.tools-privacy-description {
+        max-width: 70%;
+}
+
 @media only screen and (max-width: 1120px) {
         .filter-drawer {
                 border-bottom: 1px solid #eee;
@@ -1306 +1313 @@
         .filter-items {
                 float: none;
         }
+        
+        /*
+        * Privacy Policy settings for normal screen
+        */
+        .tools-privacy-description {
+                max-width: 100%;
+        }
 
         .wp-filter .media-toolbar-primary,
         .wp-filter .media-toolbar-secondary,

src/wp-admin/menu.php

@@ -256 +256 @@
         $submenu['tools.php'][5]  = array( __( 'Available Tools' ), 'edit_posts', 'tools.php' );
         $submenu['tools.php'][10] = array( __( 'Import' ), 'import', 'import.php' );
         $submenu['tools.php'][15] = array( __( 'Export' ), 'export', 'export.php' );
-        $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
+        $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy Policy Page' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
 if ( is_multisite() && ! is_main_site() ) {
         $submenu['tools.php'][25] = array( __( 'Delete Site' ), 'delete_site', 'ms-delete-site.php' );
 }

src/wp-admin/privacy.php

@@ -105 +105 @@
 get_current_screen()->add_help_tab( array(
         'id'      => 'privacy',
         'title'   => __( 'Privacy' ),
-        'content' => '<p>' . __( 'This page provides tools with which you can manage your user&#8217;s personal data and site&#8217;s privacy policy.' ) . '</p>',
+        'content' => '<p>' . __( 'This page provides tools to create or select your site&#8217;s Privacy Policy Page.' ) . '</p>',
 ) );
 
 get_current_screen()->set_help_sidebar(
@@ -117 +117 @@
 
 ?>
 <div class="wrap">
-        <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Tools' ); ?></h1>
+        <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy Page' ); ?></h1>
         <?php settings_errors(); ?>
-        <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
+        <p class="tools-privacy-description">
+                <?php _e( 'If your website collects or processes personal data about people within the European Union, you will need to display a Privacy Policy which conforms with the requirements of European data protection law as well as the expectations of your European users.' ); ?>
+        </p>
+        <p class="tools-privacy-description">
+                <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy Page or want to create a new one, please use one of the options below.' ); ?>
+        </p>
         <p>
-                <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
+                <?php _e( 'The new page will include headings and suggestions for your Privacy Policy text.' ); ?>
         </p>
         <p>
-                <?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+                <?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those tools and resources correctly, to provide the information that your Privacy Policy requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
         </p>
         <?php
         if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
@@ -147 +147 @@
                         <?php
                         printf(
                                 // translators: %1$s URL to Edit Page, %2$s URL to View Page
-                                __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your privacy policy page content.' ),
+                                __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your Privacy Policy Page content.' ),
                                 $edit_href,
                                 $view_href
                         );
@@ -156 +156 @@
                 <?php
         }
         ?>
-        <hr>
         <table class="form-table tools-privacy-policy-page">
                 <tr>
                         <th scope="row">