Ticket #43865: 43865.diff

src/wp-admin/menu.php

@@ -256 +256 @@
         $submenu['tools.php'][5]  = array( __( 'Available Tools' ), 'edit_posts', 'tools.php' );
         $submenu['tools.php'][10] = array( __( 'Import' ), 'import', 'import.php' );
         $submenu['tools.php'][15] = array( __( 'Export' ), 'export', 'export.php' );
-        $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
+        $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy Notice Page' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
 if ( is_multisite() && ! is_main_site() ) {
         $submenu['tools.php'][25] = array( __( 'Delete Site' ), 'delete_site', 'ms-delete-site.php' );
 }

src/wp-admin/privacy.php

@@ -117 +117 @@
 
 ?>
 <div class="wrap">
-        <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Tools' ); ?></h1>
+        <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Notice Page' ); ?></h1>
         <?php settings_errors(); ?>
-        <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
         <p>
-                <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
+                <?php _e( 'If your website collects or processes personal data about people within the European Union, you will need to display a Privacy Notice which conforms with the requirements of European data protection law as well as the expectations of your European users.' ); ?>
         </p>
         <p>
-                <?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
-                <?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+                <?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy page or want to create a new one, please use one of the options below.' ); ?>
         </p>
+        <p>
+                <?php _e( 'The new page will include headings and suggestions for your privacy notice text.' ); ?>
+        </p>
+        <p>
+                <?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those tools and resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy notice requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
+        </p>
         <?php
         if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
                 $edit_href = add_query_arg(
@@ -147 +147 @@
                         <?php
                         printf(
                                 // translators: %1$s URL to Edit Page, %2$s URL to View Page
-                                __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your privacy policy page content.' ),
+                                __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your Privacy Notice Page content.' ),
                                 $edit_href,
                                 $view_href
                         );
@@ -156 +156 @@
                 <?php
         }
         ?>
-        <hr>
         <table class="form-table tools-privacy-policy-page">
                 <tr>
                         <th scope="row">
                                 <?php
                                 if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
-                                        _e( 'Change your Privacy Policy page' );
+                                        _e( 'Change your Privacy Notice Page' );
                                 } else {
-                                        _e( 'Select a Privacy Policy page' );
+                                        _e( 'Select a Privacy Notice Page' );
                                 }
                                 ?>
                         </th>