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Ticket #43865: 43865.diff

File 43865.diff, 3.5 KB (added by xkon, 20 months ago)
  • src/wp-admin/menu.php

     
    256256        $submenu['tools.php'][5]  = array( __( 'Available Tools' ), 'edit_posts', 'tools.php' );
    257257        $submenu['tools.php'][10] = array( __( 'Import' ), 'import', 'import.php' );
    258258        $submenu['tools.php'][15] = array( __( 'Export' ), 'export', 'export.php' );
    259         $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
     259        $submenu['tools.php'][20] = array( __( 'Privacy Notice Page' ), 'manage_options', 'privacy.php' );
    260260if ( is_multisite() && ! is_main_site() ) {
    261261        $submenu['tools.php'][25] = array( __( 'Delete Site' ), 'delete_site', 'ms-delete-site.php' );
    262262}
  • src/wp-admin/privacy.php

     
    117117
    118118?>
    119119<div class="wrap">
    120         <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Tools' ); ?></h1>
     120        <h1><?php _e( 'Privacy Notice Page' ); ?></h1>
    121121        <?php settings_errors(); ?>
    122         <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
    123122        <p>
    124                 <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
    125                 <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
    126                 <?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
     123                <?php _e( 'If your website collects or processes personal data about people within the European Union, you will need to display a Privacy Notice which conforms with the requirements of European data protection law as well as the expectations of your European users.' ); ?>
    127124        </p>
    128125        <p>
    129                 <?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
    130                 <?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
    131                 <?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
    132                 <?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
     126                <?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy page or want to create a new one, please use one of the options below.' ); ?>
    133127        </p>
     128        <p>
     129                <?php _e( 'The new page will include headings and suggestions for your privacy notice text.' ); ?>
     130        </p>
     131        <p>
     132                <?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those tools and resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy notice requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
     133        </p>
    134134        <?php
    135135        if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
    136136                $edit_href = add_query_arg(
     
    147147                        <?php
    148148                        printf(
    149149                                // translators: %1$s URL to Edit Page, %2$s URL to View Page
    150                                 __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your privacy policy page content.' ),
     150                                __( '<a href="%1$s">Edit</a> or <a href="%2$s">view</a> your Privacy Notice Page content.' ),
    151151                                $edit_href,
    152152                                $view_href
    153153                        );
     
    156156                <?php
    157157        }
    158158        ?>
    159         <hr>
    160159        <table class="form-table tools-privacy-policy-page">
    161160                <tr>
    162161                        <th scope="row">
    163162                                <?php
    164163                                if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
    165                                         _e( 'Change your Privacy Policy page' );
     164                                        _e( 'Change your Privacy Notice Page' );
    166165                                } else {
    167                                         _e( 'Select a Privacy Policy page' );
     166                                        _e( 'Select a Privacy Notice Page' );
    168167                                }
    169168                                ?>
    170169                        </th>