Ticket #52347: 52347.diff

src/wp-admin/about.php

@@ -112 +112 @@
                                 </p>
                                 <p>
                                         <?php
-                                        _e( '<strong>Social Icons block:</strong> you can now change the size of the icons in the Social Icons block.' );
+                                        _e( '<strong>Social Icons block:</strong> now you can change the size of the icons.' );
                                         ?>
                                 </p>
                         </div>
@@ -193 +193 @@
                                 <h3><?php _e( 'New Robots API' ); ?></h3>
                                 <p>
                                         <?php
-                                        _e( 'The new Robots API lets you include the filter directives in the robots meta tag, and the API includes the directive <code>max-image-preview: large</code> by default. That means search engines can show bigger image previews (unless the blog is marked as not public), which can boost your traffic.' )
+                                        _e( 'The new Robots API lets you include the filter directives in the robots meta tag, and the API includes the <code>max-image-preview: large</code> directive by default. That means search engines can show bigger image previews (unless the site is marked as not public), which can boost your traffic.' )
                                         ?>
                                 </p>
                         </div>
@@ -200 +200 @@
                         <div class="column">
                                 <h3><?php _e( 'Ongoing cleanup after update to jQuery 3.5.1' ); ?></h3>
                                 <p><?php _e( 'For years jQuery helped make things move on the screen in ways the basic tools couldn’t—but that keeps changing, and so does jQuery.' ); ?></p>
-                                <p><?php _e( 'One side effect: it generated a set of cryptic messages on the dashboard that informed only developers. In 5.7, you will get far fewer of those messages, and they will be in plain language.' ); ?></p>
+                                <p><?php _e( 'In 5.7, jQuery gets more focused and less intrusive, with fewer messages in the console.' ); ?></p>
                                 <h3><?php _e( 'Lazy-load your iframes' ); ?></h3>
                                 <p><?php _e( 'Now it’s simple to let iframes lazy-load. Just add the <code>loading="lazy"</code> attribute to iframe tags on the front end.' ); ?></p>
                         </div>