Changeset 24889

Timestamp:

07/30/2013 06:34:38 AM (13 years ago)

Author:

markjaquith

Message:

Improve the 3.6 about page "Under the Hood" copy.

Props markjaquith, aaroncampbell. See #24832 for 3.6.

File:

• branches/3.6/wp-admin/about.php (modified) (4 diffs)

branches/3.6/wp-admin/about.php

@@ -55 +55 @@
                 <p><?php _e( 'It&#8217;s easy to compare two revisions from any point in time, and to restore a revision and go back to writing. Now you can be confident that no mistake is permanent.' ); ?></p>
 
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+
 
 
         </div>
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+
         <div class="feature-section col two-col">
                 <div>
@@ -70 +70 @@
                 </div>
         </div>
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 </div>
 
@@ -93 +92 @@
                 <div>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Shortcode Improvements' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New shortcode utility functions and shortcode_atts_$shortcode filter' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Search content for shortcodes with <code>has_shortcode()</code> and adjust shortcode attributes with an all new filter.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
                 <div>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Revision Control' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New fine-grained revision controls (wp_revisions_to_keep(), etc.  — filters instead of constants)' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Finely-grained revision controls allow you to keep a different number of revisions for each post type.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
                 <div class="last-feature">
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Audio/Video API' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New audio/video API, including access to file metadata' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'The new audio/video APIs give developers access to powerful media metadata.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
         </div>
@@ -107 +106 @@
         <div class="feature-section col three-col">
                 <div>
-                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Markup Updates' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'Improved markup for comment forms, search forms, and comment lists, including HTML5 markup support' ); ?></p>
+                        <h4><?php echo ( 'Semantic Markup' ); ?></h4>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Improved markup for comment forms, search forms, and comment lists, including support for HTML5 markup.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
                 <div>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'JS Utilities' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'Handy JavaScript utilities for things like Ajax, templating, and Backbone view management' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Handy JavaScript utilities ease common tasks like Ajax requests, templating, and Backbone view management.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
                 <div class="last-feature">
                         <h4><?php _e( 'External Libraries' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'New and updated libraries: MediaElement.js, jQuery 1.10, jQuery UI 1.10.3, jQuery Migrate, Backbone 1.0' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'New and updated libraries: MediaElement.js, jQuery 1.10, jQuery UI 1.10.3, jQuery Migrate, Backbone 1.0.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
         </div>