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Changeset 26763


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Timestamp:
12/07/2013 01:17:56 AM (8 years ago)
Author:
iammattthomas
Message:

Copy edits to the About page:

  • Open Sans is Open Source, so it can't meet Open Source
  • 'icons and graphics' is redundant
  • Let's not overuse 'beautiful'
  • Choose > pick so we don't use 'choose' twice in the same line

See #26387.

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  • trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php

    r26760 r26763  
    4343            <img src="images/about-modern-aesthetics.png" />
    4444            <h3><?php echo ( 'Modern aesthetic' ); ?></h3>
    45             <p><?php echo ( 'The new admin has a fresh, simple design that puts clarity and simplicity ahead of web design flourishes.' ); ?></p>
     45            <p><?php echo ( 'The new admin has a fresh, uncluttered design that puts clarity and simplicity ahead of visual flourishes.' ); ?></p>
    4646        </div>
    4747        <div class="col-2">
    4848            <img src="images/about-typography.png" />
    4949            <h3><?php echo ( 'Clean typography' ); ?></h3>
    50             <p><?php echo ( 'Open Sans meets Open Source. WordPress&#8217;s new typography is upright, friendly, and optimized for web and mobile interfaces.' ); ?></p>
     50            <p><?php echo ( 'Open Sans is Open Source. Our new typography is simple, friendly, and optimized for web and mobile interfaces.' ); ?></p>
    5151        </div>
    5252        <div class="col-3 last-feature">
     
    6464        <div>
    6565            <h3><?php echo ( 'WordPress on every&#160;device' ); ?></h3>
    66             <p><?php echo ( 'Whether you&#8217;re on your smartphone or tablet, your notebook or desktop, WordPress looks beautiful on every device. Now you can update your website wherever you are.' ); ?></p>
     66            <p><?php echo ( 'Whether you&#8217;re on your smartphone or tablet, your notebook or desktop, WordPress looks great on every device. Now you can update your website wherever you are.' ); ?></p>
    6767            <h4><?php echo ( 'High definition is here' ); ?></h4>
    68             <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress is sharper than ever; vector icons and graphics mean no more blurry edges. You get the best viewing experience no matter what type of device you use.' ); ?></p>
     68            <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress is sharper than ever; vector icons mean no more blurry edges. You get the best viewing experience no matter what type of device you use.' ); ?></p>
    6969        </div>
    7070        <div class="last-feature about-colors-img">
     
    8080        <div>
    8181            <h3><?php echo ( 'Pick a color' ); ?></h3>
    82             <p><?php echo ( 'We&#8217;ve included four color schemes so that you can choose your favorite. Don&#8217;t like this striking new admin? Choose from any of the schemes below to change it in an instant.' ); ?></p>
     82            <p><?php echo ( 'We&#8217;ve included four color schemes so that you can pick your favorite. Choose from any of the schemes below to change it in an instant.' ); ?></p>
    8383            <?php $user_id = get_current_user_id(); ?>
    8484            <?php if ( count($_wp_admin_css_colors) > 1 && has_action('admin_color_scheme_picker') ) :?>
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