Changeset 26801

Timestamp:

12/08/2013 08:54:33 AM (13 years ago)

Author:

DrewAPicture

Message:

A couple of copy edits for the About page.

See #26387.

File:

• trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php (modified) (1 diff)

trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php

@@ -108 +108 @@
                         <p><?php echo ( 'Finding and installing the right theme has never been easier.' ); ?></p>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Better browsing' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'Focus is placed on what&#8217;s important - your theme&#8217;s design. Search through your themes at a glance and add new ones with a click.' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Focus is placed on what&#8217;s important &mdash; your theme&#8217;s design. Search through your themes at a glance and add new ones with a click.' ); ?></p>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Dive into the details' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'If you need information about any of your themes just click to discover more. Sit back and use your keyboard&#8217;s navigation arrows to flip through every theme you&#8217;ve got.' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'If you need information about any of your themes, just click to discover more. Sit back and use your keyboard&#8217;s navigation arrows to flip through every theme you&#8217;ve got.' ); ?></p>
                         <h4><?php echo ( 'Stay updated' ); ?></h4>
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'You can tell in an instant if a theme needs updated and, like so many things in WordPress, updating it takes just a second.' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'You can tell in an instant if a theme needs updated, and like so many things in WordPress, updating it takes just a second.' ); ?></p>
                 </div>
                 <div class="last-feature about-themes-img">