Changeset 30822 for branches/4.1/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php

Timestamp:

12/11/2014 10:15:57 AM (11 years ago)

Author:

nacin

Message:

About page text, first pass.

Merges [30821] to the 4.1 branch.

props johnbillion, helen, markjaquith, nacin.
see #30435.

Location:

branches/4.1

Files:

• . (modified) (1 prop)
• src/wp-admin/freedoms.php (modified) (1 diff)

branches/4.1/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php

@@ -20 +20 @@
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s helps you focus on your writing, and the new default theme lets you show it off in style.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>