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Changeset 35768


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Timestamp:
12/04/2015 05:54:35 PM (6 years ago)
Author:
DrewAPicture
Message:

About page: Final string changes.

Props petya, ocean90, DrewAPicture
See #34663.

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  • trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php

    r35766 r35768  
    5252                    <h3><?php echo ( 'Introducing Twenty Sixteen' ); ?></h3>
    5353                    <p><?php echo ( 'Our newest default theme, Twenty Sixteen, is a modern take on a classic blog design.' ); ?></p>
    54                     <p><?php echo ( 'Twenty Sixteen was built with a mobile-first approach, ensuring your site will look great on any device. A harmonious fluid grid, fun color schemes, flexible mast head, and more make this a great addition to the default theme family.' ); ?></p>
     54                    <p><?php echo ( 'Twenty Sixteen was built to look great on any device. A fluid grid design, fun color schemes, a flexible header, and more, will make your content shine.' ); ?></p>
    5555                    <div class="horizontal-image">
    5656                        <div class="content">
     
    7575            <div class="col">
    7676                <h3><?php echo ( 'Responsive images' ); ?></h3>
    77                 <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress now takes a smarter approach to displaying device-appropriate image sizes, ensuring a perfect fit every time. You don&#8217;t need to do anything to your theme, it just works.' ); ?></p>
     77                <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress now takes a smarter approach to displaying appropriate image sizes on any device, ensuring a perfect fit every time. You don&#8217;t need to do anything to your theme, it just works.' ); ?></p>
    7878            </div>
    7979        </div>
     
    8686                    <?php echo wp_oembed_get( 'https://make.wordpress.org/core/2015/10/28/new-embeds-feature-in-wordpress-4-4/' ); ?>
    8787                </div>
    88                 <h3><?php echo ( 'Embeddable WordPress content' ); ?></h3>
    89                 <p><?php echo ( 'Now you can embed WordPress content inside of other WordPress content. Simply drop a post URL into the editor and see an instant embed preview, complete with title, excerpt, comment and sharing links, even your site icon.' ); ?></p>
     88                <h3><?php echo ( 'Embed your WordPress content' ); ?></h3>
     89                <p><?php echo ( 'Now you can embed your posts on other sites, even other WordPress sites. Simply drop a post URL into the editor and see an instant embed preview, complete with the title, excerpt, and featured image if you&#8217;ve set one. We&#8217;ll even include your site icon and links for comments and sharing.' ); ?></p>
    9090            </div>
    9191            <div class="col">
     
    9393                    <?php echo wp_oembed_get( '' ); ?>
    9494                </div>
    95                 <h3><?php echo ( 'More third-party embeds' ); ?></h3>
    96                 <p><?php echo ( 'If the addition of post embeds weren’t enough, WordPress 4.4 also adds support for five new oEmbed providers: Cloudup, ReverbNation, Reddit&nbsp;Comments, VideoPress, and Speaker&nbsp;Deck.' ); ?></p>
     95                <h3><?php echo ( 'Even more embed providers' ); ?></h3>
     96                <p><?php echo ( 'In addition to post embeds, WordPress 4.4 also adds support for five new oEmbed providers: Cloudup, Reddit&nbsp;Comments, ReverbNation, Speaker&nbsp;Deck, and VideoPress.' ); ?></p>
    9797            </div>
    9898        </div>
     
    107107                    <h4><?php echo ( 'REST API infrastructure' ); ?></h4>
    108108                    <div class="two-col-text">
    109                         <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress 4.4 marks the beginning of a new era with integration of infrastructure for the new REST API. The REST API serves to provide developers with a robust path forward for building and extending RESTful APIs on top of WordPress.' ); ?></p>
     109                        <p><?php echo ( 'Infrastructure for the REST API has been integrated into core, marking a new era in developing with WordPress. The REST API serves to provide developers with a path forward for building and extending RESTful APIs on top of WordPress.' ); ?></p>
    110110                        <p><?php
    111111                            if ( current_user_can( 'install_plugins' ) ) {
     
    124124
    125125                            /* translators: WordPress REST API plugin link */
    126                             printf( ( 'Infrastructure is the first part of a multi-stage rollout for the REST API, which also targets inclusion of core endpoints in an upcoming release. To get a sneak peek of the core endpoints, and for more on extending the REST API, check out the official %s plugin.' ), $plugin_link );
     126                            printf( ( 'Infrastructure is the first part of a multi-stage rollout for the REST API. Inclusion of core endpoints is targeted for an upcoming release. To get a sneak peek of the core endpoints, and for more information on extending the REST API, check out the official %s plugin.' ), $plugin_link );
    127127                        ?></p>
    128128                    </div>
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