Changeset 35768

Timestamp:

12/04/2015 05:54:35 PM (9 years ago)

Author:

DrewAPicture

Message:

About page: Final string changes.

Props petya, ocean90, DrewAPicture
See #34663.

File:

• trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php (modified) (6 diffs)

trunk/src/wp-admin/about.php

@@ -52 +52 @@
                     <h3><?php echo ( 'Introducing Twenty Sixteen' ); ?></h3>
                     <p><?php echo ( 'Our newest default theme, Twenty Sixteen, is a modern take on a classic blog design.' ); ?></p>
-                    <p><?php echo ( 'Twenty Sixteen was built with a mobile-first approach, ensuring your site will look great on any device. A harmonious fluid grid, fun color schemes, flexible mast head, and more make this a great addition to the default theme family.' ); ?></p>
+                    <p><?php echo ( 'Twenty Sixteen was built to look great on any device. A fluid grid design, fun color schemes, a flexible header, and more, will make your content shine.' ); ?></p>
                     <div class="horizontal-image">
                         <div class="content">
@@ -75 +75 @@
             <div class="col">
                 <h3><?php echo ( 'Responsive images' ); ?></h3>
-                <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress now takes a smarter approach to displaying device-appropriate image sizes, ensuring a perfect fit every time. You don&#8217;t need to do anything to your theme, it just works.' ); ?></p>
+                <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress now takes a smarter approach to displaying appropriate image sizes on any device, ensuring a perfect fit every time. You don&#8217;t need to do anything to your theme, it just works.' ); ?></p>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -86 +86 @@
                     <?php echo wp_oembed_get( 'https://make.wordpress.org/core/2015/10/28/new-embeds-feature-in-wordpress-4-4/' ); ?>
                 </div>
-                <h3><?php echo ( 'Embeddable WordPress content' ); ?></h3>
-                <p><?php echo ( 'Now you can embed WordPress content inside of other WordPress content. Simply drop a post URL into the editor and see an instant embed preview, complete with title, excerpt, comment and sharing links, even your site icon.' ); ?></p>
+                <h3><?php echo ( 'Embed your WordPress content' ); ?></h3>
+                <p><?php echo ( 'Now you can embed your posts on other sites, even other WordPress sites. Simply drop a post URL into the editor and see an instant embed preview, complete with the title, excerpt, and featured image if you&#8217;ve set one. We&#8217;ll even include your site icon and links for comments and sharing.' ); ?></p>
             </div>
             <div class="col">
@@ -93 +93 @@
                     <?php echo wp_oembed_get( '' ); ?>
                 </div>
-                <h3><?php echo ( 'More third-party embeds' ); ?></h3>
-                <p><?php echo ( 'If the addition of post embeds weren’t enough, WordPress 4.4 also adds support for five new oEmbed providers: Cloudup, ReverbNation, Reddit&nbsp;Comments, VideoPress, and Speaker&nbsp;Deck.' ); ?></p>
+                <h3><?php echo ( 'Even more embed providers' ); ?></h3>
+                <p><?php echo ( 'In addition to post embeds, WordPress 4.4 also adds support for five new oEmbed providers: Cloudup, Reddit&nbsp;Comments, ReverbNation, Speaker&nbsp;Deck, and VideoPress.' ); ?></p>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -107 +107 @@
                     <h4><?php echo ( 'REST API infrastructure' ); ?></h4>
                     <div class="two-col-text">
-                        <p><?php echo ( 'WordPress 4.4 marks the beginning of a new era with integration of infrastructure for the new REST API. The REST API serves to provide developers with a robust path forward for building and extending RESTful APIs on top of WordPress.' ); ?></p>
+                        <p><?php echo ( 'Infrastructure for the REST API has been integrated into core, marking a new era in developing with WordPress. The REST API serves to provide developers with a path forward for building and extending RESTful APIs on top of WordPress.' ); ?></p>
                         <p><?php
                             if ( current_user_can( 'install_plugins' ) ) {
@@ -124 +124 @@
 
                             /* translators: WordPress REST API plugin link */
-                            printf( ( 'Infrastructure is the first part of a multi-stage rollout for the REST API, which also targets inclusion of core endpoints in an upcoming release. To get a sneak peek of the core endpoints, and for more on extending the REST API, check out the official %s plugin.' ), $plugin_link );
+                            printf( ( 'Infrastructure is the first part of a multi-stage rollout for the REST API. Inclusion of core endpoints is targeted for an upcoming release. To get a sneak peek of the core endpoints, and for more information on extending the REST API, check out the official %s plugin.' ), $plugin_link );
                         ?></p>
                     </div>