Changeset 37170 for trunk/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php

Timestamp:

04/10/2016 02:02:04 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

jeremyfelt

Message:

4.5 About Page, second round.

• Adjust text.
• Improve headings hierarchy.
• Add translation functions and translator comments throughout.

Props ocean90, afercia, ramiy, mikeschroder, mattfelten, helen.
See #36173.

File:

• trunk/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php (modified) (1 diff)

trunk/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php

@@ -20 +20 @@
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s makes your site more connected and responsive.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s streamlines your workflow, whether you&#8217;re writing or building your site.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>