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Changeset 42045


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Timestamp:
10/31/17 00:20:58 (3 weeks ago)
Author:
pento
Message:

About page: Tweak the privacy policy language, for clarity.

See #40794.

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  • trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php

    r42017 r42045  
    3333<p class="about-description"><?php _e( 'From time to time, your WordPress site may send data to WordPress.org &#8212; including, but not limited to &#8212; the version of WordPress you are using, and a list of installed plugins and themes.' ); ?></p> 
    3434 
    35 <p><?php printf( __( 'This data helps WordPress to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates, as well as other general enhancements. The data is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p> 
     35<p><?php printf( __( 'This data is used to provide general enhancements to WordPress, which includes helping to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates. It is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p> 
    3636 
    3737<p><?php printf( __( 'We take privacy and transparency very seriously. To learn more about what data we collect, and how we use it, please visit <a href="%s">WordPress.org/about/privacy</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/privacy/' ); ?></p> 
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