Changeset 42891

Timestamp:

04/02/2018 10:14:53 AM (7 years ago)

Author:

flixos90

Message:

General: Improve wording for PHP version nag.

This changeset adjusts the tone of the message to fit the usual core voice better and addresses accessibility concerns.

Props schlessera.
See #41191.

File:

• trunk/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php (modified) (3 diffs)

trunk/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php

@@ -1621 +1621 @@
     $information_url = _x( 'https://wordpress.org/support/upgrade-php/', 'localized PHP upgrade information page' );
 
-    $msg = __( 'Hi, it’s your friends at WordPress here.' );
     if ( ! $response['is_secure'] ) {
-        $msg .= ' ' . __( 'We noticed that your site is running on an insecure version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
+        $msg = __( 'WordPress has detected that your site is running on an insecure version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
     } else {
-        $msg .= ' ' . __( 'We noticed that your site is running on an outdated version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
+        $msg = __( 'WordPress has detected that your site is running on an outdated version of PHP, which is why we’re showing you this notice.' );
     }
 
@@ -1635 +1634 @@
     <p><?php _e( 'If you want to know exactly how PHP works and why it is important, continue reading.' ); ?></p>
 
-    <h3><?php _e( 'Okay, how do I update?' ); ?></h3>
+    <h3><?php _e( 'How can I upgrade my PHP version?' ); ?></h3>
     <p><?php _e( 'The button below will take you to a page with more details on what PHP is, how to upgrade your PHP version, and what to do if it turns out you can&#8217;t.' ); ?></p>
     <p>
@@ -1641 +1640 @@
     </p>
 
-    <h3><?php _e( 'Thank you for taking the time to read this!' ); ?></h3>
-    <p><?php _e( 'If you carefully follow the instructions we&#8217;ve provided, upgrading shouldn&#8217;t take more than a few minutes, and it is generally very safe to do.' ); ?></p>
-    <p><?php _e( 'Good luck and happy blogging!' ); ?></p>
+    <p><?php _e( 'Upgrading usually takes only a few minutes and should be safe if you follow the provided instructions.' ); ?></p>
     <?php
 }