Changeset 43131

Timestamp:

05/03/2018 12:06:48 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

iandunn

Message:

Privacy: Revise Privacy Policy page text to avoid misunderstanding.

The previous sentence was gramatically awkward, and using the term "compliance" could accidentally be mistaken by a site owner for a promise by WordPress that their site will be compliant after using the tool, which is not necessarily true.

Props idea15, allendav, azaozz, iandunn.
See #43435.

File:

• trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php (modified) (1 diff)

trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php

@@ -128 +128 @@
     <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
     <p>
-        <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
+        <?php _e( 'As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy policy.' ); ?>
         <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
     </p>