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Changeset 43131


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Timestamp:
05/03/2018 12:06:48 AM (15 months ago)
Author:
iandunn
Message:

Privacy: Revise Privacy Policy page text to avoid misunderstanding.

The previous sentence was gramatically awkward, and using the term "compliance" could accidentally be mistaken by a site owner for a promise by WordPress that their site will be compliant after using the tool, which is not necessarily true.

Props idea15, allendav, azaozz, iandunn.
See #43435.

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  • trunk/src/wp-admin/privacy.php

    r43118 r43131  
    128128    <h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
    129129    <p>
    130         <?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
     130        <?php _e( 'As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy policy.' ); ?>
    131131        <?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
    132132    </p>
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