Changeset 53156

Timestamp:

04/12/2022 01:41:44 PM (3 years ago)

Author:

audrasjb

Message:

Administration: Clarify some sentences after [53131].

Props SergeyBiryukov, costdev, audrasjb.
Fixes #46057.

Location:

trunk/src/wp-admin

Files:

• options-privacy.php (modified) (1 diff)
• setup-config.php (modified) (1 diff)

trunk/src/wp-admin/options-privacy.php

@@ -191 +191 @@
     <p>
         <?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, you should edit it.' ); ?>
-        <?php _e( 'It is also suggested that you should review your Privacy Policy from time to time, especially after installing or updating any themes or plugins. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+        <?php _e( 'You should also review your Privacy Policy from time to time, especially after installing or updating any themes or plugins. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
     </p>
     <p>

trunk/src/wp-admin/setup-config.php

@@ -159 +159 @@
         ?>
 <h1 class="screen-reader-text"><?php _e( 'Before getting started' ); ?></h1>
-<p><?php _e( 'Welcome to WordPress. Before getting started, some information on the database is needed. You will need to know the following items before proceeding.' ); ?></p>
+<p><?php _e( 'Welcome to WordPress. Before getting started, you will need to know the following items.' ); ?></p>
 <ol>
     <li><?php _e( 'Database name' ); ?></li>