Changeset 57112 for branches/6.4/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php

Timestamp:

11/15/2023 05:35:35 PM (14 months ago)

Author:

jorbin

Message:

Help/About: Improve translation comment around release notes.

Reviewed by SergeyBiryukov.
Merges [57081] to the 6.4 branch.

Props kharisblank, kebbet.
Fixes #59821.

Location:

branches/6.4

Files:

• . (modified) (1 prop)
• src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php (modified) (4 diffs)

branches/6.4/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php

@@ -530 +530 @@
         if ( $description ) {
             /* translators: Privacy policy tutorial. */
-            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'In this subsection you should list the cookies your web site uses, including those set by your plugins, social media, and analytics. We have provided the cookies which WordPress installs by default.' ) . '</p>';
+            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'In this subsection you should list the cookies your website uses, including those set by your plugins, social media, and analytics. We have provided the cookies which WordPress installs by default.' ) . '</p>';
         } else {
             /* translators: Default privacy policy text. */
@@ -578 +578 @@
         if ( $description ) {
             /* translators: Privacy policy tutorial. */
-            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'In this section you should explain how long you retain personal data collected or processed by the web site. While it is your responsibility to come up with the schedule of how long you keep each dataset for and why you keep it, that information does need to be listed here. For example, you may want to say that you keep contact form entries for six months, analytics records for a year, and customer purchase records for ten years.' ) . '</p>';
+            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'In this section you should explain how long you retain personal data collected or processed by the website. While it is your responsibility to come up with the schedule of how long you keep each dataset for and why you keep it, that information does need to be listed here. For example, you may want to say that you keep contact form entries for six months, analytics records for a year, and customer purchase records for ten years.' ) . '</p>';
         } else {
             /* translators: Default privacy policy text. */
@@ -642 +642 @@
             $strings[] = '<h2>' . __( 'What third parties we receive data from' ) . '</h2>';
             /* translators: Privacy policy tutorial. */
-            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'If your web site receives data about users from third parties, including advertisers, this information must be included within the section of your privacy policy dealing with third party data.' ) . '</p>';
+            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'If your website receives data about users from third parties, including advertisers, this information must be included within the section of your privacy policy dealing with third party data.' ) . '</p>';
         }
 
@@ -649 +649 @@
             $strings[] = '<h2>' . __( 'What automated decision making and/or profiling we do with user data' ) . '</h2>';
             /* translators: Privacy policy tutorial. */
-            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'If your web site provides a service which includes automated decision making - for example, allowing customers to apply for credit, or aggregating their data into an advertising profile - you must note that this is taking place, and include information about how that information is used, what decisions are made with that aggregated data, and what rights users have over decisions made without human intervention.' ) . '</p>';
+            $strings[] = '<p class="privacy-policy-tutorial">' . __( 'If your website provides a service which includes automated decision making - for example, allowing customers to apply for credit, or aggregating their data into an advertising profile - you must note that this is taking place, and include information about how that information is used, what decisions are made with that aggregated data, and what rights users have over decisions made without human intervention.' ) . '</p>';
         }