Changeset 8741

Timestamp:

08/27/2008 06:33:01 AM (16 years ago)

Author:

westi

Message:

Improve grammar in Gears Enable Dialog. Fixes #7176 props Speedboxer.

File:

• trunk/wp-admin/admin-header.php (modified) (3 diffs)

trunk/wp-admin/admin-header.php

@@ -92 +92 @@
     <p><?php _e('WordPress now has support for Gears, which adds new features to your web browser.'); ?><br />
     <a href="http://gears.google.com/" target="_blank" style="font-weight:normal;"><?php _e('More information...'); ?></a></p>
-    <p><?php _e('After you install and enable Gears most of WordPress&#8217; images, scripts, and CSS files will be stored locally on your computer. This speeds up page load time.'); ?></p>
+    <p><?php _e('After you install and enable Gears, most of WordPress&#8217; images, scripts, and CSS files will be stored locally on your computer. This speeds up page load time.'); ?></p>
     <p><strong><?php _e('Don&#8217;t install on a public or shared computer.'); ?></strong></p> <div class="submit"><button onclick="window.location = 'http://gears.google.com/?action=install&amp;return=<?php echo urlencode( admin_url() ); ?>';" class="button"><?php _e('Install Now'); ?></button>
     <button class="button" style="margin-left:10px;" onclick="document.getElementById('gears-info-box').style.display='none';"><?php _e('Cancel'); ?></button></div>
@@ -99 +99 @@
     <div id="gears-msg2" style="display:none;">
     <h3 class="info-box-title"><?php _e('Gears Status'); ?></h3>
-    <p><?php _e('Gears is installed on this computer but is not enabled for use with WordPress.'); ?></p>
+    <p><?php _e('Gears is installed on this computer, but is not enabled for use with WordPress.'); ?></p>
     <p><?php
 
     if ( $is_safari )
-        _e('To enable it, make sure this web site is not on the denied list in Gears Settings under the Safari menu, then click the button below.');
+        _e('To enable it, ensure this web site is not on the denied list in Gears Settings under the Safari menu, then click the button below.');
     else
-        _e('To enable it, make sure this web site is not on the denied list in Gears Settings under your browser Tools menu, then click the button below.');
+        _e('To enable it, ensure this web site is not on the denied list in Gears Settings under your browser&#8217;s Tools menu, then click the button below.');
 
     ?></p>
-    <p><strong><?php _e('However if this is a public or shared computer, Gears should not be enabled.'); ?></strong></p>
+    <p><strong><?php _e('However, Gears should not be enabled if this is a public or shared computer.'); ?></strong></p>
     <div class="submit"><button class="button" onclick="wpGears.getPermission();"><?php _e('Enable Gears'); ?></button>
     <button class="button" style="margin-left:10px;" onclick="document.getElementById('gears-info-box').style.display='none';"><?php _e('Cancel'); ?></button></div>
@@ -120 +120 @@
         _e('Gears is installed and enabled on this computer. You can disable it from the Safari menu.');
     else
-        _e('Gears is installed and enabled on this computer. You can disable it from your browser Tools menu.');
+        _e('Gears is installed and enabled on this computer. You can disable it from your browser&#8217;s Tools menu.');
 
     ?></p>
-    <p><?php _e('If there are any errors, try disabling Gears, then reload the page and enable it again.'); ?></p>
+    <p><?php _e('If there are any errors try disabling Gears, reloading the page, and re-enabling Gears.'); ?></p>
     <p><?php _e('Local storage status:'); ?> <span id="gears-wait"><span style="color:#f00;"><?php _e('Please wait! Updating files:'); ?></span> <span id="gears-upd-number"></span></span></p>
     <div class="submit"><button class="button" onclick="document.getElementById('gears-info-box').style.display='none';"><?php _e('Close'); ?></button></div>