Index: src/wp-admin/credits.php
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--- src/wp-admin/credits.php	(revision 42156)
+++ src/wp-admin/credits.php	(working copy)
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s adds more ways for you to express yourself and represent your brand.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
+<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s will smooth your design workflow and keep you safe from coding errors.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
Index: src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
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--- src/wp-admin/freedoms.php	(revision 42156)
+++ src/wp-admin/freedoms.php	(working copy)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s adds more ways for you to express yourself and represent your brand.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
+<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s will smooth your design workflow and keep you safe from coding errors.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
Index: src/wp-admin/privacy.php
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--- src/wp-admin/privacy.php	(revision 42156)
+++ src/wp-admin/privacy.php	(working copy)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s helps you get your site set up the way you want it.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
+<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s will smooth your design workflow and keep you safe from coding errors.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>