Index: src/wp-admin/about.php
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--- src/wp-admin/about.php	(revision 50466)
+++ src/wp-admin/about.php	(working copy)
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
 				</p>
 				<p>
 					<?php
-					_e( '<strong>Social Icons block:</strong> you can now change the size of the icons in the Social Icons block.' );
+					_e( '<strong>Social Icons block:</strong> now you can change the size of the icons.' );
 					?>
 				</p>
 			</div>
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
 				<h3><?php _e( 'New Robots API' ); ?></h3>
 				<p>
 					<?php
-					_e( 'The new Robots API lets you include the filter directives in the robots meta tag, and the API includes the directive <code>max-image-preview: large</code> by default. That means search engines can show bigger image previews (unless the blog is marked as not public), which can boost your traffic.' )
+					_e( 'The new Robots API lets you include the filter directives in the robots meta tag, and the API includes the <code>max-image-preview: large</code> directive by default. That means search engines can show bigger image previews (unless the site is marked as not public), which can boost your traffic.' )
 					?>
 				</p>
 			</div>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
 			<div class="column">
 				<h3><?php _e( 'Ongoing cleanup after update to jQuery 3.5.1' ); ?></h3>
 				<p><?php _e( 'For years jQuery helped make things move on the screen in ways the basic tools couldn’t—but that keeps changing, and so does jQuery.' ); ?></p>
-				<p><?php _e( 'One side effect: it generated a set of cryptic messages on the dashboard that informed only developers. In 5.7, you will get far fewer of those messages, and they will be in plain language.' ); ?></p>
+				<p><?php _e( 'In 5.7, jQuery gets more focused and less intrusive, with fewer messages in the console.' ); ?></p>
 				<h3><?php _e( 'Lazy-load your iframes' ); ?></h3>
 				<p><?php _e( 'Now it’s simple to let iframes lazy-load. Just add the <code>loading="lazy"</code> attribute to iframe tags on the front end.' ); ?></p>
 			</div>