Index: src/wp-admin/erase-personal-data.php
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<+>UTF-8
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diff --git a/src/wp-admin/erase-personal-data.php b/src/wp-admin/erase-personal-data.php
--- a/src/wp-admin/erase-personal-data.php	(revision 489260a45ae44b7a7ad6282040542079cb756782)
+++ b/src/wp-admin/erase-personal-data.php	(date 1636324250700)
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
 		'id'      => 'overview',
 		'title'   => __( 'Overview' ),
 		'content' =>
-					'<p>' . __( 'This screen allows you to manage requests to erase or delete personal data.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( 'Deleting, anonymizing, or forgetting all data that a business or website has collected about an individual is a requirement of many Privacy Laws around the world, and is sometimes referred to as the "Right To Be Forgotten".' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( 'The tool associates data stored in WordPress by a supplied email address, including profile data and comments.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'This screen is where you manage requests to erase personal data.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'Privacy Laws around the world require businesses and online services to delete, anonymize, or forget all the data they collect about an individual. The rights those laws enshrine are sometimes called the "Right of Data Portability."' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'The tool associates data stored in WordPress with a supplied email address, including profile data and comments.' ) . '</p>' .
 					'<p><strong>' . __( 'Note: As this tool only gathers data from WordPress and participating plugins, you may need to do more to comply with erasure requests. You should also delete any data collected by or stored with any 3rd party services used by your business or site.' ) . '</strong></p>',
 	)
 );
@@ -31,12 +31,8 @@
 		'id'      => 'default-data',
 		'title'   => __( 'Default Data' ),
 		'content' =>
-					'<p>' . __( 'Personal data that is collected by WordPress and is deleted or anonymized include:' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Profile Information</strong> &mdash; user email address, username, display name, nickname, first name, last name, description/bio, and registration date.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Community Events Location</strong> &mdash; The IP Address of the user which is used for the Upcoming Community Events shown in the dashboard widget.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Session Tokens</strong> &mdash; User login information, IP Addresses, Expiration Date, User Agent (Browser/OS), and Last Login.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Comments</strong> &mdash; Comments are not deleted, but user data is anonymized, including Email Address, IP Address, and User Agent (Browser/OS).' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Media</strong> &mdash; A list of URLs for all media file uploads made by the user.' ) . '</p>',
+					'<p>' . __( 'WordPress collects (but <em>never</em> publishes) a limited amount of data from logged-in users but then deletes it or anonymizes it. That data can include: ' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Comments</strong> &mdash; WordPress does not delete comments. The software does anonymize (but, again, <em>never</em> publishes) the associated Email Address, IP Address, and User Agent (Browser/OS).' ) . '</p>' ,
 	)
 );
 
@@ -52,7 +48,7 @@
 		'title'   => __( 'Plugin Data' ),
 		'content' =>
 					'<p>' . __( 'Many plugins may collect or store personal data either in the WordPress database or remotely. Any Erase Personal Data request should delete data from plugins as well.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( 'Plugin authors can <a href="https://developer.wordpress.org/plugins/privacy/adding-the-personal-data-eraser-to-your-plugin/" target="_blank">learn more about how to add support for the Personal Data Eraser to a plugin here</a>.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'If you are a plugin author, you can <a href="https://developer.wordpress.org/plugins/privacy/adding-the-personal-data-eraser-to-your-plugin/" target="_blank">learn more about how to add support for the Personal Data Eraser to a plugin here</a>.' ) . '</p>' .
 					$privacy_policy_guide,
 	)
 );
@@ -159,4 +155,4 @@
 </div>
 
 <?php
-require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-footer.php';
+require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-footer.php';
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Index: src/wp-admin/export-personal-data.php
IDEA additional info:
Subsystem: com.intellij.openapi.diff.impl.patch.CharsetEP
<+>UTF-8
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diff --git a/src/wp-admin/export-personal-data.php b/src/wp-admin/export-personal-data.php
--- a/src/wp-admin/export-personal-data.php	(revision 489260a45ae44b7a7ad6282040542079cb756782)
+++ b/src/wp-admin/export-personal-data.php	(date 1636324512007)
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
 		'id'      => 'overview',
 		'title'   => __( 'Overview' ),
 		'content' =>
-					'<p>' . __( 'This screen allows you to manage requests for an export of personal data.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( 'Providing an export of all data that a business or website has collected about an individual is a requirement of many Privacy Laws around the world, and is sometimes referred to as the "Right To Data Portability".' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( 'The tool associates data stored in WordPress by a supplied email address, including profile data and comments.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p><strong>' . __( 'Note: As this tool only gathers data from WordPress and participating plugins, you may need to do more to comply with export requests. You should also send the requestor any data collected by or stored with any 3rd party services used by your business or site.' ) . '</strong></p>',
+					'<p>' . __( 'This screen is where you can manage requests for an export of personal data.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'Privacy Laws around the world require businesses and online services to delete, anonymize, or forget all the data they collect about an individual. The rights those laws enshrine are sometimes called the "Right of Data Portability".' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'The tool associates data stored in WordPress with a supplied email address, including profile data and comments.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p><strong>' . __( 'Note: As this tool only gathers data from WordPress and participating plugins, you may need to do more to comply with export requests. For example, you should also send the requester all the data collected from or stored with the 3rd party services your organization uses.' ) . '</strong></p>',
 	)
 );
 
@@ -31,12 +31,13 @@
 		'id'      => 'default-data',
 		'title'   => __( 'Default Data' ),
 		'content' =>
-					'<p>' . __( 'Personal data that is collected by WordPress and is displayed in the export files include:' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( 'WordPress collects (but <em>never</em> publishes) a limited amount of data from registered users who have logged in to the site. Generally, these users are people who contribute to the site in some way -- content, store management, and so on. With rare exceptions, these users do not include occasional visitors who might have registered to comment on articles or buy products.
+The data WordPress retains can include:' ) . '</p>' .
 					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Profile Information</strong> &mdash; user email address, username, display name, nickname, first name, last name, description/bio, and registration date.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Community Events Location</strong> &mdash; The IP Address of the user used for the Upcoming Community Events shown in the dashboard widget.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Community Events Location</strong> &mdash; The IP Address of the user, which populates the Upcoming Community Events dashboard widget with relevant information.' ) . '</p>' .
 					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Session Tokens</strong> &mdash; User login information, IP Addresses, Expiration Date, User Agent (Browser/OS), and Last Login.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Comments</strong> &mdash; For any comments made by the user, Email Address, IP Address, User Agent (Browser/OS), Date/Time, Comment Content, and Content URL.' ) . '</p>' .
-					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Media</strong> &mdash; A list of URLs for all media file uploads made by the user.' ) . '</p>',
+					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Comments</strong> &mdash; For user comments, Email Address, IP Address, User Agent (Browser/OS), Date/Time, Comment Content, and Content URL.' ) . '</p>' .
+					'<p>' . __( '<strong>Media</strong> &mdash; A list of URLs for media files the user uploads.' ) . '</p>',
 	)
 );
 
@@ -159,4 +160,4 @@
 </div>
 
 <?php
-require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-footer.php';
+require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-footer.php';
\ No newline at end of file
