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Changes between Version 1 and Version 2 of Ticket #27192, comment 12


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03/04/2014 12:42:38 AM (11 years ago)
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Hanni
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  • Ticket #27192, comment 12

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    1 "We recommend updating your temporary password on first log in" could perhaps be phrased a little differently. I understand what this means, but nonetheless read it a couple of times as it appeared a tad awkward, perhaps (this is coming form someone who appears to have an uncanny ability to create these kinds of awkward sentences).
     1"We recommend updating your temporary password on first log in" could perhaps be phrased a little differently. I understand what this means, but nonetheless read it a couple of times as it appeared a tad awkward, perhaps (this is coming form someone who appears to have an uncanny ability to create these kinds of awkward sentences). So, I concur with @downstairsdev.
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    33Since it's being sent to new users created on a multisite install, one might be able to suggest that there is a possibility of unfamiliarity with the process, or indeed with WordPress as a whole.
     
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    1212Thoughts?
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     15(edited for clarify to reflect the fact that I started writing this last night, before @downstairdev's comments)